I Need a Mortal Sin to Wake Up What is Within.

I’ve lost the words the words lost me;

I’ve nothing left to set me free, into my

dreams I shall surely flee. I’ve lost

the thoughts, they’ve lost me, the waves

are harsh and i’m lost at sea. I’m all alone

with nothing to show what’s happened

to my creative flow. I need to see I need to touch

I need the orgasmic final rush. They’re locked away

where they might stay, I beg you please, i’m on

my knees, give me back the fucking key! I’m all

without, i’m all within I need a moment in

mortal sin.

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Welcome to my blog! Here you will find different forms of creative writing, lots of swearing, erotic poetry, random thoughts, beautiful imagery, but most of all you will find a version of truth. My truth, this is the way that I see the world. However, all of my work is a form of creative writing, a combination of truth and fiction. I write to express my creativity, not my needs!

3 thoughts on “I Need a Mortal Sin to Wake Up What is Within.”

  1. Excellent! Love the (seemingly) chaotic structure of the rhyming,and cadence; it hides the classical tone so well hidden in the more modern language/syntax….

    If you can’t tell, I like it; it’s a good metaphor for a solution to the very issue it addresses…. Well done.




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